If she's had a hard day of test taking, offering her an upbeat alternative gives her the chance to escape into your message -- and a date painted as an escape sounds quite inviting too. So it's got to be short. If you have a girl's email, chances are you've met in person and exchanged some conversation already at this point. I hope my advice here is helpful for you however I also realize success is also often easier said than done. If you continue to struggle writing your first emails or struggle with getting responses with a service like this, trying a service like eHarmony might be helpful. Joshua Spodek Taking Initiative Podcast.
Cut it down.
I travel every chance I can and love being around those I share things in common with. I am very sociable and enjoy being around people. To avoid this, I would try to show my true level of interest by exaggerating it.